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Writing Updates! P.2

7/6/2021

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Many moons ago (lol), I was talking to my friend Trade about Rivener, and they asked me a fantastic question. I'm paraphrasing here because I don't have my old blog with the record of it, but essentially they asked me what the worst versions of my characters would look like. And I said with Wren, she'd be something like Cormac (my main antagonist). Brutal, unafraid of her own power or using it, and utterly devoid of empathy. I said she'd become like that in an alternate universe where she met Cormac while young and was raised by him and his ideals.

But then...as much as I like angst, I couldn't just leave it at that. I love happy endings! No matter how hard it is to get there! (Sometimes the harder, the better, you know?) Anyway, we ended up talking through what would happen if that version of Wren met Kai, how they'd meet, if he would help her change, and what their story would look like. Ultimately, the world would still be the same—post-apocalyptic, though leaning more towards sci-fi than urban fantasy—but certain events would change, impacting the characters and their development. 
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Several months passed where I stopped writing almost entirely but didn't stop thinking about this, and after some more recent chats with Trade and Hyba, I decided to scrap my first rewrite of Rivener (which, if you don't know, I'd been sort of attempting to do) and properly pick up this AU. 

And now it's an actual thing! I've written 6k for it so far over the past couple days, planned a good chunk of it out, and have the writing bug again (such a good feeling, when you just wanna write and write and write, like an itch). It's going fantastically, if I do say so myself. However...

I was (am still? sorta?) a little nervous to share this version of my story (creatively titled Rivener 2.0) because...this Wren is awful. She does awful things and is complicit in awful things. Internet purity culture has me worried about what the response will be to this character who can lightly be described as ~problematic~. She changes, of course. This story is still about two very damaged people healing, the journey they go through together and because of each other. But it's also a lot darker. Or I delve into the darker aspects more.

Wren is not exactly a villain, but she's not a hero either, not for a long while. She is, in fact, closely aligned with the main villain. Not entirely of her own free will, but...well. Some may think she's irredeemable, which is valid. But I think it's rare that people are truly irredeemable. I do believe everyone has the capacity to change, if they want to, if they decided to, if they commit to it and keep trying and learning and unlearning, if they work hard to not repeat their mistakes or the way they've hurt people, if they apologize by word and action.

I don't think anyone is owed forgiveness, but I believe everyone can earn some sort of...grace? I don't know if that's the word I'm looking for, maybe redemption is closer to the mark.  So yeah. Wren will have a pretty significant redemption arc. I hope I can do a good job conveying the complicated person she is, with pretty severe faults but equally admirable qualities and depth to her. Her journey is not easy. She can never erase the things she's done. But I hope you cheer her on as she grows to be a better person, even if she can never fully make up for who she was. I hope you understand where she's coming from, even if it doesn't excuse her actions or beliefs. 

Now this AU is not all about Wren, and Kai too is changed from the original story. Firstly. we're meeting him in vastly different circumstances, when he's arguably a much rawer character? In the original, he'd been enslaved to Cormac for a while by the time he met Wren, and a few years before that he was "stock" on a "farm" (for spoiler reasons, I won't explain what that means).

In this AU, he meets Wren having just been removed from the farm. He's less docile, but at heart, still the same sweet, gentle, traumatized Kai of the original. They have a long way to go before they like each other, given who Wren is and how they meet in this AU. She treats him pretty terribly. Not as terribly as she could've, and not as terribly as others, but...oof. They have an uphill battle ahead of them.

Still! I'm really excited to write this story, difficult (in topics and tone) as it is! I get to explore the world a little bit more, flesh out Cormac a lot more, and write some scenes I always wanted to, which didn't end up having a place in the original! I hope you guys will come along with me on this journey!

Have you ever written or read a character who starts out as awful and slowly transforms for the better (or the reverse)? How did it go? Do you think they managed to become sympathetic or appealing to the reader, despite their faults? Do comment below, or drop me an email, and let me know! I'd love to talk about this!

In the meantime, have an excerpt:
Cormac listened quietly to this report, and the only indication of his rage was the wreaths of fog coiling around his feet like cats, which swelled and billowed behind him like a cloud before he hissed out a breath and it quieted to nothing more but tendrils of mist, cold and spreading across the floor. Wren braced herself against the reach and touch of it, felt a grim sort of perverse pleasure at the way Threader flinched, the way the others fidgeted, discomfited.

“The traitor must have been a shifter too,” Tamsin concluded. “The runners all agreed the smoke didn’t do anything to her, and she didn’t have a gas mask.”

“How did she slip under our radar?” Cormac asked.

Tamsin swallowed, lifted her chin, said evenly, “We don’t know, sir.”

Cormac said nothing.

“The overseer was the first killed,” Jacks volunteered into the charged silence. “Everyone said he was in charge of the hiring. So no one knows how a shifter got past him. Sir,” he added belatedly, as Cormac’s pale eyes slid from Tamsin to fix on him. 
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“Hm,” Cormac said. The mist on the floor thickened into a carpet, opaque enough to hide the sight of their own feet underneath it.
Stay tuned for P.3 of my writing updates, where I will talk about my Glitch wip! Happy reading and writing!
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Hyba link
3/7/2021 07:43:47 am

So cool to see where your new Rivener AU is going! Wren's character change is intriguing, and I can't wait to see more of it. It's definitely a challenge writing a character that has done awful things, especially as it pertains to them changing and turning into more of a Good Guy. I have the same issue with Vadra, a main character in my fantasy novel, The Pirates of Sissa, and I also have the same concerns about how he's going to be received by readers.

I think recognizing that these characters aren't owed forgiveness and that they will be fighting an uphill battle in trying to make up for the things they've done is a good start. They can't erase the past, but they can at least try to make up for it, in a way.

One of the things that became very clear to me early on in my writing was that I couldn't reach too far with the relationship of the two main characters. I've been asked before by someone if this was going to be an enemies to lovers arc, and I'm not sure if that was what I was going for at first, but as his character became more and more serious and fleshed out, I realized I didn't want to trivialize what Vadra has done by giving him that kind of redemption-through-love arc? I really wanted this book to focus on the nitty gritty of how he has to face the consequences of his earlier actions by coming face to face with the very people he has hurt. So, when writing this character, I definitely feel like I have a big uphill battle, and I can only hope that I can do that transformation justice. As for the relationship between him and the other main character, getting them to tolerate and then respect each other is going to be in and of itself a huge feat, and that's the goal for me with these two characters in this book.

I've also had to deal with breaking down his assumptions and biases one at a time. These actually fuel his "reason" for being the way that he is before we meet him as readers, and as they crumble, he realizes that everything he thought he knew and felt so secure in believing was wrong. It's tricky to write that for me - I end up defaulting to internal monologue, but I hope to find more creative ways to let Vadra see the errors of his ways in the new and improved draft.

I'm sure there will be readers out there who dislike Vadra even after the books and everything he does to try and right the wrongs he's made in the past, as impossible as that seems for him. It's hard to accept someone knowing what horrible things they did in the past, and even harder to believe that they've changed. I'm hoping to portray that change as realistically as possible.

Good luck to us both with these characters!!

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Sumayyah
8/7/2021 07:55:54 pm

That's so exciting to see we're going on similar journeys with our characters! Vadra is gonna go through such a profound change and I can't wait to see it unfold! Wren is in a bit of a different position because she doesn't actually believe the ideology she pretends she does. She really is just in survival mode, but it's also a bit selfish and privileged of her to be able to ignore the inhumanity of what she's participating in! I think because Wren is in a different position than Vadra, a romance between her and Kai feels more feasible! But I don't plan on doing a redemption-through-love arc! Wren redeems herself, or makes efforts to, long before she ever looks at Kai (or is seen by him) as a love interest. In fact, romance is meant to be something that happens very near the end of the entire story, because the main point is them becoming healthier, happier people, and finding support/connection in each other! They help each other first to be their best selves, long before they fall in love, or even acknowledge their love for each other. Or that's the goal anyway!

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